Tuesday, 27 September 2011

Through the tunnel

SETTINGS
place : Sea shore and in the sea
Time : Morning time and during the day

MAIN CHARACTER
The English white boy, Jerry was the main character. He was only 11 years old but a very good swimmer. Jerry was a very determined boy with a mind of an adult. He never gave up on whatever he wanted. Jerry was the mothers only child and he always got what whatever he demanded.

PLOT
The story started off when the young English boy Jerry and the mother went on a beach for a holiday. Jerry's mother was a widow and he was all she was left with. Jerry was only 11 years old but he was a very good swimmer than. On the first morning of their holiday, they went to the beach and after some time that Jerry  spend at the beach he met some big boys that he was swimming with and trying to make friends with , but unfortunately it didn't work out for him.Jerry saw one of the big boy that dived but he was taking long to come to the surface. He got frightened and started calling for help since he was swimming with  that big boy but the other big boys didn't care because they knew he was going to get through the tunnel. As Jerry was still calling for help, he saw the big boy that dived for a long time coming from the other side. Jerry was wondering how the big boy got to the other side, he also dived and saw the tunnel. He then started practising his lungs heavily, he made his mother buy him some swimming goggles ,bled several times, but he never gave up. He was so determined to go through the tunnel. He went back to the beach again few days before they were going to leave and after all the heavy practises Jerry went through, he finally made it through the tunnel.

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